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Man hater?

During the past years, Men they said before are the most powerful creatures leaving on earth. They are more useful than women because of their extra ordinary strengths and ability to do certain things and hard works compared of what women can do. Also, men’s are known for being kind, loving, and gentleman in so many ways, especially when it comes in treating Women’s, the opposite sex.

 

The men’s tried their best just to get the affection of the one they loved, and the one they wanted to marry before.

My parents used to tell me before that during their old days, men do whatever the parents of their loved one, want them to do. In order to spend their time with their girlfriends, they do the orders of the parents. But then again, that was before, some old stories which we all heard from our parents, Where In fact, leaving in this present generation, that story is really very impossible to happen again.

Nowadays, most of the Men’s populations are thieves. They snatched cell phones, bags and things which is important to all the students like me. I have encountered a lot of incidents before wherein, snatchers climbed at the back portion of the jeep where I’m riding toward school. Those snatchers observed all the passengers moved, and physical appearances because their looking for their victims. While one of them sit beside me and cut the side of my backpack without my knowing. However they didn’t get anything from me, because that day I didn’t brought my cell phone nor my wallet, and that’s the good thing.

I’m not saying that I’m a man hater; I just don’t like some of them much, because they do kill their wives and parents. While, some of them raped minors even their own daughters, wives and parents. Not just that, but they also insult Women’s capacity and ability. Men’s do and get what ever they want without thinking others feeling. They gamble, fight and cheat with their loved one’s and wives. More often, women are left pregnant because of them, and when it’s done they looked for another victim again.

In addition, few men hurt their loved ones when they are drunk, which is not good really. That example was proven already in past news in television, but either way they still hurt women’s physically even when they are not drunk just like our neighbor. The Men always kicked and give her wife a punched whenever he get jealous with a text messages that he reads in her wife’s cell phone, without a proof, if those written message are true.

Whatever you are, Men and women are equal, so we should all be treated as equal and as a person and not just a toy or punching bag.  We are all humans and have feelings, that might be hurt when abuse. Men’s should be thankful that they are not in the women’s shoes. Even though we have different personality, characteristics and physical appearances compared to each other, we should respect and appreciate one another, and be thankful for whom we are and what we are not.

 

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November 24, 2008 - Posted by | Uncategorized

19 Comments »

  1. Hmmm…I am going to throw a beautiful smile on this one!

    I would have to dissent with everything the article states for they lack support, and as some statements need justification.The whole article needs thorough editing if not revision. I believe that we are to write something about our dark side and not of the other people. Consult someone to check the use of nouns and apostrophes. Sometimes, all we need is focus for us to fully understand what we are writing about.

    I highlighted the entire article for me to be able to read it. You can do better than this Grace. You can write a better article! I believe!

    83 for you!

    Comment by nickie wang | November 24, 2008 | Reply

  2. Eureka! Someone have found the article which epitomizes darkness.

    Dark letters, dark background and miniature font size. My goodness I copy-pasted the article to MS Word just so I could give justice for your effort.

    I can’t quite put a finger on what your dark side is although I see your point about the darkside of men.

    Furthermore work needs to be done to improve the grammar particularly your possessives.

    I’m sorry but this stays in the darkness with 80%

    Comment by crimsonpen | November 26, 2008 | Reply

  3. Grade: 90

    Wow! you sure have a lot on your chest eh?

    A lot of it is true, but not all men are like that.

    I don’t know why . . . but it feels like there’s something else you want to say, but something’s holding you back.

    Just a gut feeling, I’m just glad you don’t see all men that way.

    Article was enjoyable. . . Some grammatical errors, but totally a fun article to read :-)

    Comment by pikerevita | November 26, 2008 | Reply

  4. Hmmm.the article seems to be more of a propaganda and feminist type as it relays the sentiments of the writer although it is good it would have been better to express it in equal terms as not every man acts the way she depicts it. anyhow, there are quite a number of errors found in the article that needs polishing.

    grade: 85

    Comment by miguelvelasco41 | November 26, 2008 | Reply

  5. although its dark (ha ha)
    this article shows a lot of experiences of the author.
    a good article

    grade: 1.75

    Comment by cioz | November 26, 2008 | Reply

  6. i’m sensing stereotypes here.

    i spotted a lot of grammatical errors. i hope it could be repaired. i’m seeing this article as a very long sermon on how bad men are. and i don’t quite agree with some of the statements *or i just don’t see men the way you’re seeing them. for me, they are a helpful bunch *maybe not all* in the society and admit it or not, we need them.

    and yeah. women can also be just as bad.

    anyway i’m giving this article an 84% :)

    Comment by camscamscams | November 26, 2008 | Reply

  7. the article talks generally about men. what about priests? they are also men but they are not involve in those immoral acts. the generalization of the article became unfair to some readers.
    many errors can be spotted including the use of words, apostrophe and sentence construction.

    Grade:81

    Comment by ulap9999 | November 26, 2008 | Reply

  8. grammatical errors found.. hehe.. but its okey,,

    GRADE: 2.0

    Comment by heidz8288 | November 26, 2008 | Reply

  9. There are some Gramatical errors.

    89 for you.

    Comment by ohmyjeka | November 28, 2008 | Reply

  10. This article is not about your dark side. You just tried to depict how bad men were. You used apostrophes when you didn’t need it. A little check in your grammar and capitalization will do good. Grade: 92

    Comment by joeviepangalanko | November 28, 2008 | Reply

  11. That is why it’s time to GET EVEN!(just kidding). This article makes me wonder if the writer has been trashed by a man or men before. Hmmm…

    But then, I guess not all men are evil. Maybe it’s time the writer looks at the good side of them. There are always two sides of the coin.

    There are grammatical and some minor errors in sentence constructions.

    Grade: 86

    Comment by Kit | November 28, 2008 | Reply

  12. there were flaws in grammar and sentence construction but it’s okay… i know you could do better next time…i like your topic though…

    2.0

    Comment by chamage3 | November 30, 2008 | Reply

  13. Okay, it’s not that I oppose what you’ve written in your story. All of us have our own opinions and I respect yours. It’s just that for me, it’s like you’ve put yourself into stereotyping (of men). Well i guess it’s not fair enough, come to think of your father also. He’s also a man. (Right?c:)

    What you need is more focus. I mean, focus on the things you want to point out. (Let your article be your voice.c:) Proof read it. I know you’ll do better the next time around. 89%

    Comment by iamemjhey | December 1, 2008 | Reply

  14. Typo error

    My verdict is 82

    Peace!

    Comment by joeviepangalanko | December 2, 2008 | Reply

  15. its good that you enumerate some of your bad experiences with men, but i’m still searching for the bad side of the author. :)

    86% for this one. ^^

    Comment by mizfits | December 3, 2008 | Reply

  16. Grace, nice opinion but I guess you should balance everything in your article. Avoid stereotypes or prejudice! Anyway, your article is still good but of course there some few lapses.

    * Love GUYS ok? :) *

    GRADE: 95

    Comment by lien03 | December 3, 2008 | Reply

  17. Not all men are bad. I know a lot of good men. Maybe i can introduce some to you.hehehe..
    Hope you can see the good side of some men (if not all). Life could be happier if we do not hate much.
    There are some grammatical errors.
    I give you 84%… :)

    Comment by lydialuisa | December 4, 2008 | Reply

  18. No matter what you say, I felt there was a gender bias here. Most crimes we have to admit are done by men. But haven’t you noticed that the biggest criminal in the country now is a woman – and a so called leader at that. So what is your dark side? Your hatred of men? Well I can’t blame you cuz you’re a victim of male thieves and snatchers. How about the biggest cheater, liar, thief and murderer of them all? Grace, you gotta triple check your sentences. I know you can. Good luck. (78)

    PS. Pike, is your first sentence realistic or symbolic?

    Comment by lynx2002 | December 5, 2008 | Reply

  19. It’s not that men are bad, it’s just that men easily give in to primary needs, even if it requires them to be bad. Like what others have said, not all men are bad, look at Pike for example, he’s good. He may be at some point a rough around the edges but he’s cool. Check the grammary errors.

    88

    Comment by julianjavier | December 8, 2008 | Reply


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