My Dream date
When I was a kid, I was dreamed of my Prince charming on what does he look like. My second to eldest sister (way back when I was thirteen years old) had a boyfriend who fetch her and take her back home after class every day. Sometimes I see them both argue and then after two to three days they will both make an apology with each other.
The idea of it gives me the feeling of excitement and thinking that soon, when I’m old enough I will have a boyfriend too and I will be able to handle every situations that might happen just like my sister. But then, now that I’m at my right age I realized that finding a date, a partner in life or a person you will spend your life to in the future is not an easy task. There is a lot of processing that you will encounter to be able to meet the person you are destined with.

floating City of Venice in Italy
I guess, people go dating not just to search for their match, but also to enjoy life to the fullest by relaxing their mind in everyday stressed that they encounter not just through working, but also to mingle with different kind of people with their different kind of attitude.
If I were to choose where to spend my day on a date with some one, I prefer in Italy, in Venice, why? Venice is a very romantic place for me, I don’t know w hy (because we have different perspective and taste towards a thing) but I find the City wonderful and interesting. The City itself where in, the lights coming from the buildings and houses at night reflected into the deep exquisite water gives additional impact to the beauty of the City, floating in such incredible water is a very unique and magnificent venue for me to spend a date with someone special in my heart. The idea of having a date with someone in such kind of place is very exciting.
While the boat is moving, a group of band or musician (in our same boat also) will play a romantic type of song for the people on the boat which will serve as our background music while cruising the City of Venice.My Father had already visited the country, and he’s the one who told me about the Venice City floating on deep water. He said that a lot of people go there dating (and also at the boat) and sometimes they made their request love song to the musician to play for them while at the boat. Since then, I’m wishing also and dreaming that someday I could experience such thing in my life. I think it’s very cool and awesome to experience with.
Then after we cruise the whole City of Venice, we will go to a Restaurant or Hotel to have some dinner date with candle light and eat some delicious foods like: Pasta, Spare Ribs, fresh Veggies, Crabs, Chocolates and Cakes, lots of food to feed our aching stomach and then we drink some red wine.. uhmmm.. Yummy.

Lido Beach in Venice, Italy
After we eat, we will ride a ferry boat again, which around 20 minutes or half an hour before we reach the Lido Beach, near the Venice City also, still in Italy. When we get there, we will take a walk bare foot on the white sand holding hands while carrying our sandals and shoes and still changing and giving information with each other.
When we reach the rocks side of the beach, we will stop and go midnight fishing. Then after that, we will make a bonfire in our place and continue talking again while eating again some sea foods and fish.
After we eat, we will lay down our back together on the white sand, looking at the sky and stars above and still talking together until the sun rise.
When the sun was rise, he will take me home, back to the hotel or in our house. (if we have a house located there) and give me a kiss on my cheek at the front of the main door (with his eyes sparkling) and saying ” Thanks for the wonderful day with you. I really appreciate it a lot. The time we spend together is really amazing and inspiring to me. Have a wonderful sleep, bye”. And that is the time when I shut the door close, leaning on the back of it with a smile on my face.
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I’ve seen Venice on TV, Internet, movies and books, and I think it’s really a good place to spend time with someone special. This article reads like a fairytale story: a princess who’s dreaming to be found by his prince, not vice versa. Finding someone you love and who loves you back isn’t a task, at least for me. I think it’s destiny, so better not spend time thinking hard, waiting and pressuring yourself just because you think it’s a mission to be accomplished. You are not a secret agent bound to complete an assignment or a “task”, are you? (kidding)
(89)
Please mind your verbs, Grace. The shift from personal to possessive pronouns also makes for quite difficult reading. Imagine you waited for your belly to grumble before grabbing a bite to eat. The waters around Venice also stink, so it’s quite hard to be romantic and to think of having dinner after enduring pangs of hunger while riding the boat and listening to the live music. The music probably entertaining will not soothe the acid already eating the lining of your stomach. Imagine getting sick on a date!
And then after filling your belly, you go back to the gondolas and rock yourself to nausea? Well, the vomit will surely add to the stink of Venice’s waters. That’s really one nice contribution on a date! (joke) Do you also “change” information or money? So, while conversing you eat raw sea foods and sea creatures? Would it be ok to cook it first on the bonfire? Then you lie down on the sands in your bikini with a towel for a mat? Gosh, that’s a very tiring date? And with all the raw stuff in your belly, you’ll surely end up messing up your date by going to the john!
Well, it’s always nice to imagine things, Grace. But mind your sentences. [82]
Grace, it’s Gondola, the boat your talking about.
O well, i love the place, i love the country and the river.
It is one of the romantic places in the World.
Nice one!
GRADE: 85
Grace try expanding the horizon of your verbs from simple past and present to include the perfect and progressive tenses as well. It will suit most of your sentences better.
That being said I also feel hesitant about the credibility of your sources for your dream date. It is better to speak about places that we have sufficient and intimate first-hand knowledge of. You see when you write about something that you don’t really know extensively, it’s quite difficult if not impossible to defend your points.
Better page lay-out and color. Now we only need to work on the grammar and the finetuning of your thought organization would come easily. This merits an (85).
Grace, there are errors in your sentences. I can’t quite understand what you are saying sometimes. Like, “My father already gone I that Country,” What exactly do you mean by that? I find it difficult to read the entire article.
please double check the sentences. 84%
A typical date on beautiful parts of the world. . . Wow!! It is a dream date!
Glitches in grammar are present, but if you stick to the storyline, you’d still be very happy.
Grade:85
Venice is really a romantic place for couples; a perfect place for all kinds of dates.. this one is well written except for some flaws that should be polish. but again good choice of place.
Grade: 85%
Like what precious stated Venice is a romantic place…even i would like to go there if given the opportunity. some errors abound but the article is still good.
grade: 88
Alright Grace. Wanted to finish the whole article but you started the it with lots of visible errors. I think if you would not consider reviewing subject and verb agreement and use of proper verb tense, it will be hard for you to have improvements. Like we’ve always been saying try it, try to make things better. 80 for you.
plenty of errors occured.. the thoughts and ideas were nice but it was blocked by several grammatical errors.
grade: 85
Venice, Italy is such an ideal place to take your someone special. There’s no doubt that it is really a romantic spot.
Unfortunately, I have to say that there are several errors in your article. You need to take a second look on it. There are flaws on your grammars and sentence construction.
There are still room for improvements, develop it more. 87%
Woah!Italy i love it. There are some error in your sentence just like mine hehe. *apir.
89 for you. Happee hearts day.
Venice is such a nice place to experience a nice date with somebody you love. I see that you really value your family that you keep on mentioning them on your article, that’s nice. There were some tenses problems and grammatical errors but I see your sincerity in writing this one and thanks for posting on time.
Grade: 87
venice is nice. but please mind your verbs and your grammar
85%
nice place to be. haha…
nice thought but some few errors. Shout for joy of 88
What a romantic place to have a date…It’s very romantic there in Venice…I would love to go there too…Just check on some errors especially when it comes to grammar…
89…
i love the place and the country so romantic…89 for you